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The email immediately struck me as a tad too casual to send to someone you don't know. "What's up man?" is fine when you know someone, even slightly, but if you're approaching someone unknown...well, it might be a risky intro.
If the fraternity chapter actually gives a contact name (as opposed to just generalinfo@abc, I'd address the person by name.
"Hi Mike --I'll be taking part in fraternity recruitment this winter and am interested in finding out about the events ABC will be holding. Any info would be appreciated and I look forward to meeting you guys."
I'd keep it to that, but some fraternity men may be able to advise you better. What did you find out at the website in regards to registering? That may be all you need to do. Best wishes to you!
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