Need help with a paper

[ree-Xi]

Originally Posted by KappaSig_OT

yea this is a persuasive paper..

and to everyone else, thanks for not helping. all i need was a few statistics to go on but its ok. and sorry for the errors in the first post, i was in a hurry.

What is the premise of your paper? What is your stance? Something really makes me want to read this.

[SWTXBelle]

Speaking as an English professor, I think you should also pay close attention to the veracity of your sources. Quoting a random poster on the internet is not going to carry much weight - but the organizations violetpretty gave you will have statistics and the authority of a recognized organization.
Be sure and check the MLA (if that's the style your professor uses) for the correct way to cite the websites.