Help on shirt design

[FSUZeta]

much, much more readable . agree that the lei is a little lost right now and brighter colors and more deliniated outline of the lei might help it "pop".

maybe a little grass shack at the edge of the water with a surfboard leaning against a wall and a woody parked nearby. palm trees too.

and since we all helped out, can we come?

[PhiGam]

Attempt #3, I really like this one and I think that all the girls will too.

[ForeverRoses]

I think it's perfect. Nice Job.

Originally Posted by indygphib

Just a suggestion, but I'd definitely use a different font than the Comic Sans you used for the date of the event. It looks too 3rd-grade teacher-ish. (Personally, I can't STAND Comic Sans because it's so overused.)

I really like the other font, though!

Originally Posted by PhiGam

Attempt #3, I really like this one and I think that all the girls will too.

What indygphib said.

[alum]

Maybe the date could be written in the same font although a different size as FIJU Islander minus the flowers.

[PhiGam]

New attempt at a guys shirt, I incorporated the Fiji coat of arms into it (the country)

[FSUZeta]

both are really nice. have you tried "fiji islander" in a smaller size under the coat of arms? of course, that is if this is the design for the front of the shirt-then you could do the same on the back , only larger.

[alum]

I like the bamboo lettering except I would have it written in a lighter shade of brown. The capital D in Islander looks a bit like an O.

I think it's somewhat offensive to use a fake crest of scantily-clad natives with that risque saying as the motto.

[PhiGam]

Originally Posted by alum

I like the bamboo lettering except I would have it written in a lighter shade of brown. The capital D in Islander looks a bit like an O.

I think it's somewhat offensive to use a fake crest of scantily-clad natives with that risque saying as the motto.

As long as none of my brothers are offended (which they wont be) I think we'll be ok. Delta Tau Delta got away with a shirt that says "Fuck you, I'm a Delt" earlier this year.

I don't get it. You're trying to do an "Islander" theme but your "natives" look almost Mayan/Incan/Aztec.

I'm Hawaiian. And I know my ancestors surely didn't look like that.

You might want to leave the "natives" out. They look out of place already as it is.

[FSUZeta]

that bikini top looks kind of like a double santa claus hat-i could not tell what it was until i read the post. maybe a different one?

[PhiGam]

Originally Posted by FSUZeta

that bikini top looks kind of like a double santa claus hat-i could not tell what it was until i read the post. maybe a different one?

ok

[PhiGam]

Originally Posted by OTW

I don't get it. You're trying to do an "Islander" theme but your "natives" look almost Mayan/Incan/Aztec.

I'm Hawaiian. And I know my ancestors surely didn't look like that.

You might want to leave the "natives" out. They look out of place already as it is.

You might have wanted to read what I posted. Thats the official coat of arms for the island of fiji.

Originally Posted by PhiGam

You might have wanted to read what I posted. Thats the official coat of arms for the island of fiji.

My apologies.

I still think it looks out of place, though.

But I do like the bamboo lettering.

[PhiGam]

Or this... with a bikini top hanging from the F.