Helping out another sorority

[MysticCat]

Originally Posted by AGDee

Be prepared to explain why you are assisting as well, some will ask. "The chapter here at Your University had a lot of seniors graduate last year and since we are right down the road, we offered (or were asked) to help."

Okay, way out of my lane, but here goes:

Would it be too over-the-top to tweak what you suggested by saying "Our sisters here . . . " rather than "the chapter here"? To me that seems like a natural way to underscore that sisterhood extends beyond the single chapter.

/Back to my lane.

[AGDee]

Originally Posted by MysticCat

Okay, way out of my lane, but here goes:

Would it be too over-the-top to tweak what you suggested by saying "Our sisters here . . . " rather than "the chapter here"? To me that seems like a natural way to underscore that sisterhood extends beyond the single chapter.

/Back to my lane.

Definite improvement on my wording.. thank you!