Help With Possible Novel?

[TheNxtNancyDrew]

Why CAN'T it be based on your campus? Writers write better when they're really familiar with the subject matter.

Good question. In a lot of ways, the campus will be quite similar to mine, because that's what I know. I'm not someone from (for instance) a small New England liberal arts college setting my book in the SEC. But, in a lot of ways my own college was very...different, and I don't think a lot of it would translate into a more "normal" college/sorority experience. Furthermore, I don't want the college in the book to be correlated with my own school, and I particularly don't want people thinking "I bet XYZ sorority in the book are ABC at [college]." For the same reason people on GC don't reveal their college or code on recruitment stories, I don't want my novel to be obviously about [college]. I am explicitly making up a University and sororities, and with that comes some traditions that I never experienced (for instance our Homecoming Weekend is NOTHING like any other I've ever heard or read about, and we have several traditions--that very much shaped the way we recruited and socialized, that are completely unique to the school. I'd probably need to replace these events with something more "traditional" like Greek Week). Am I over explaining?

Maybe it's just me but I don't think these 2 sentences mesh well together.

Valid concern, and one I've put a lot of thought into. If anything causes me to scrap the book and start over, it'll probably be this. Right now, the plan is that the first "suspect"--the one the police never give up on, and what causes our heroine to start investigating on her own--is the sorority. The death is assumed to be hazing related, and the sorority is on the verge of getting shut down. Other suspects will be the rival sorority, "bitter" girl who didn't get a bid (or possibly dropped during pledging), etc., but in fact the villain is someone outside the system with their own agenda. I do think it could be problematic, but hopefully I can handle it with finesse and take a hard look at how people inside and outside the system see each other.

Sorry about the huge wall of text. All of these questions/concerns are definitely valid and are helping me think through the book's concept and execution, so thank you.

[AOII Angel]

Kappa Kappa Beta sounds like a knock off of Kappa. Light and dark green instead of blue and a lock instead of a key. Hmmmm....

[MysticCat]

Originally Posted by AOII Angel

Kappa Kappa Beta sounds like a knock off of Kappa. Light and dark green instead of blue and a lock instead of a key. Hmmmm....

Which is why she said:

Originally Posted by TheNxtNancyDrew

Additionally, I’ll be making up a lot of sorority names, colors, mascots, etc. and I really want to make sure these don’t resemble any actual existing sororities. This will not be one of those books where the sorority is Kappa Kappa Beta, and their colors are dark green and light green, and their symbol is the lock.

[AOII Angel]

Originally Posted by MysticCat

Which is why she said:

LOL...Hooked on Phonics worked for me.

[AGDAlum]

An archives search turned up a post I wrote in 2004 about another sorority mystery.

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(I thought there was a thread about this, but a quick search of the archive didn't turn it up....I'm sure someone will correct me. <g>)

Anyway: _Weeping_ is the title of a great new mystery by Shelly Reuben. (pub. 3/04 by Justin & Charles, ISBN 1-932112-20-0) If you like Janet Evanovich's mysteries starring Stephanie Plum you'll like arson investigator Fritillary Quilter! The victim of the nefarious plot is an actress who was a member of Gamma Phi Beta at Hudson University. The chapter house and the housemother are written about with a familiarity that only a Greek would know.

I'll bet Shelly Reuben is a Gamma Phi....does anyone have an alumnae directory?

[TPA85]

Originally Posted by TheNxtNancyDrew

Right now, the plan is that the first "suspect"--the one the police never give up on, and what causes our heroine to start investigating on her own--is the sorority. The death is assumed to be hazing related, and the sorority is on the verge of getting shut down. Other suspects will be the rival sorority, "bitter" girl who didn't get a bid (or possibly dropped during pledging), etc., but in fact the villain is someone outside the system with their own agenda.

That's what I expected. Personally: not a fan.
We don't need any more stories about hazing, especially when the end result is death.

If I read the synopsis of a book and it said what you're describing, I would make a face like this: + and pick something else up. If you are looking for an "accurate portrayal of Greek Life", you're pretty off track, imo.

[shirley1929]

Originally Posted by TheNxtNancyDrew

The death is assumed to be hazing related, and the sorority is on the verge of getting shut down. .

Originally Posted by TPA85

That's what I expected. Personally: not a fan.
We don't need any more stories about hazing, especially when the end result is death.

Not 100% sure, but my HUNCH here (based on the way she worded it) is that the plot twist is that the death is actually NOT hazing related...and thus not a hazing death story.

I'd be interested in reading...