HS girl analyzes Fraternity party behavior

hoosier · #1 10-11-2003, 04:34 PM

http://morganhilltimes.com/life/lifeview.asp?c=77229

James · #2 10-11-2003, 04:48 PM

That was really entertainingly written. Kudo's to the high school senior.

Lets see if four years of stuffy proffessors actually regresses her writing ability lol.

MTSUGURL · #3 10-12-2003, 02:10 AM

That is AWESOME.

Optimist Prime · #4 10-12-2003, 02:21 AM

Yeah I hate professors. They were cool untill they started teaching nothing but real world classes. Now professors are just people who failed in the real world.

absolutuscchick · #5 10-12-2003, 08:50 AM

What an awesome article! Whoa I wish I wrote that well!

Lady Pi Phi · #6 10-12-2003, 10:44 AM

I really enjoyed that article.

I too wish I could write like that.

James · #7 10-12-2003, 12:35 PM

In order to write better I had to unlearn what I learned/learn in school. Both Highschool and college.

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Originally posted by Lady Pi Phi
I really enjoyed that article.

I too wish I could write like that.

CatStarESP4 · #8 10-12-2003, 07:13 PM

This is one of the most interesting articles I have ever read. It reminds me of an episode of ER when a bird researcher was brought in after a little accident. She was observing nonverbal interactions between men and women and compared them to the mating rituals of different species of birds. I also found the author's style like Sex and the City's Carrie Bradshaw!

33girl · #9 10-12-2003, 07:47 PM

in the immortal words of Kevin Powell....stupid bitch.

have fun sitting at home showing off your big words...you certainly won't have any dates once this comes out.

Rio_Kohitsuji · #10 10-13-2003, 10:29 AM

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Originally posted by 33girl
in the immortal words of Kevin Powell....stupid bitch.

have fun sitting at home showing off your big words...you certainly won't have any dates once this comes out.

a little harsh aren't we?

Personally, I thought this article was very entertaining and well written. Give her a break, she's having some fun w/it

Lady Pi Phi · #11 10-13-2003, 11:11 AM

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Originally posted by James
In order to write better I had to unlearn what I learned/learn in school. Both Highschool and college.

Well that shouldn't be too hard...seeing as I don't think I learned all that much...in highschool or college

Munchkin03 · #12 10-15-2003, 12:11 AM

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Originally posted by 33girl
in the immortal words of Kevin Powell....stupid bitch.

have fun sitting at home showing off your big words...you certainly won't have any dates once this comes out.

CTFU...CTFU!

At least she didn't sound as self-righteous as the kids they get to write the "teen" columns in my hometown paper.

astroAPhi · #13 10-15-2003, 01:09 AM

I dunno, it seemed very forced. She was obviously trying to write with style, and it was very rough IMO. I remember learning to write "with style" my junior year of high school and I remember how forced my writing seemed.

Maybe she'll get better eventually, but you can tell she wrote this for an assignment, not to put in the paper.