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Originally Posted by MysticCat
Okay, way out of my lane, but here goes:
Would it be too over-the-top to tweak what you suggested by saying "Our sisters here . . . " rather than "the chapter here"? To me that seems like a natural way to underscore that sisterhood extends beyond the single chapter.
/Back to my lane.
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Definite improvement on my wording.. thank you!