Help: I need a Line...(and a name)

[Perseverance]

The one I'm currently using in the book is Hot Headz Hair & Nails.

Hot Headz is the name of the salon that I go to.

Originally posted by Miss. Mocha
This line is MAD hilarious to me. Every time I read it, I die laughing. But I don't understand what Passion being her name has to do with him putting his fingers in her drink. I should've prefaced that by saying that I am sometimes VERY naive, so maybe my mind just doesn't work like yours.

OK lemme add more then and edit a lil.

There is a drink called Thug Passion. I dunno what's in it. She can order it cuz it's her name and stuff.

Him: Passion right?

Her: yeah

Him: Can I put dip my finga in it?

Her: What the hell?? Listen you nasty mutha sucka I'm not some ole raggedy chickenhead....yada yada

Him: Whoa, Whoa. Be easy. I meant in your drink...you ordered a Thug Passion right?

[delph998]

Originally posted by laidbackfella
OK lemme add more then and edit a lil.

There is a drink called Thug Passion. I dunno what's in it. She can order it cuz it's her name and stuff.

Him: Passion right?

Her: yeah

Him: Can I put dip my finga in it?

Her: What the hell?? Listen you nasty mutha sucka I'm not some ole raggedy chickenhead....yada yada

Him: Whoa, Whoa. Be easy. I meant in your drink...you ordered a Thug Passion right?

STRANGE'! STRANGE'! I absolutely luv it!!

[Miss. Mocha]

ttt

Was anything here helpful?

[Miss. Mocha]

Originally posted by laidbackfella
Was anything here helpful?

Yes, thank you all so much. I decided to stick with Hot Headz Hair & Nail Salon. In the end, I liked that one the best.

As for the line, I'm using a variation of many people's suggestions. It's something like, "do you tast like fruit, can I have a bite." Something off the chain like that.

Thanks to everybody who helped me out. Look for your "Hollas" when the book comes out.