gc freestyle

[Bro2B]

It ain't lucky my flow's destructive and tumbles off the tongue so seductive
You're surprised my verses are terse and it's holdin ya captive
I got a captive audience so forgive me as I put in my two cents
This verse ain't spurious, but you're bi-curious and my poetic copiousness is intense
My rhymes are like when you have sex, usually over in less than a minute
Body's turning inside out because he had an orgasm and (GASP) you didn't
You call yourself a woman, but you'll keep sayin "I'm with the band"
Sorry you aren't feelin so fresh, but you'll like the odor of your own brand
I'ma get off this topic, just droppin it so here's where I'll digress
Ya flow is sorry, your level is more like "highlights" not "reader's digest"
I get the feeling it's not talent you have, but techno-savvy to copy& paste
I asked ya boy bout his first blowjob, like hey, how'd it taste?
Don't cry though as we're here near the end of this verbal twister
It's a fact with this attack I could say I'm tighter than your little sister
But I'll drop something original now, which you won't do for days, even weeks
At the end of my rhyme, this very line, means I'm tighter than two butt cheeks

[Peaches-n-Cream]

I like this:
your level is more like "highlights" not "reader's digest"

[KSig RC]

Some have spent too long on the inter-web
Playing word games made up in her head
I won't give the time of day when we play these silly charades,
turn you away like gays at a st paddy's parade
i'm not impressed with your best, no matter how it's dressed
there's no flesh, all you have is syncopation at best
while the rest hoot and holler at a baller-to-be
showing off big words like it's the SAT
honestly i don't see a sixteen hundred for you
just getting light-headed like tylenol cold & flu
some talk about it while the others do -
look at me, child, when i'm talking to you
practice some more, this game you declare
a couple more years and maybe you'll be there
did you get your style from watching 8 mile,
or downloading eyedea in the detroit finals?
either way, let me say that it impresses me not
to hear internet bragging about rhyming hot
lay it down on wax, throw down a beat
then maybe i'll toss the roses at your feet
if you never done produced, then you ain't done shit
no one considers battling in someone's basement
to be the real deal, no matter how you spin it
unless it's RC, that's me, the one you'll never forget

[librasoul22]

Originally posted by Bro2B
If you honestly think that would win at a battle, you are sadly mistaken.

And a lot of your stuff is played/bitten - like the 404 line, I have heard that so many times. Keep droppin' that knowledge...

Okay, you keep saying that (familiar defensive technique btw, nice), but can you please cite what is bitten? I type each verse in response to the one before it. The 404 thing, I admit I have heard it before, but mine was in reference to GC crash last night. Come on man, if you are getting beat just say it, no need to call bite when you can't back it up.

The fact that you don't drop anything personalized says to me that it is not new material, so let's be real. I haven't called it yet because you haven't stepped it up, so there's no need.

I will still spit back though...

And I see you KSig...

[librasoul22]

Bro2b come in here as if he's rocking timbs and Sean Johns
Truth be told he's on the sideline in a dress with pom poms
Cheering the home team, oops, I meant spitting his verse
Male cheerleaders or female MC's, which is worse?
You're too repetitive, can I see my name in a rhyme?
I mean, I'm competitive can I get a theme for my next line?
If not its all good I'll just chatter bout nonsense
Better yet I'll just quote your last flow's contents
But oops! If I do that you might say my rhymes are so bitten
But I think in actuality you jealous of my spittin
Whether you green with envy or you green with youth
You might sit and absorb cause what you'll glean is truth

And KSIG RC, if GC had sound
My presence would part the circuits and open the ground
And the beats would be enough to make you fall down and give praise
Then the lyrics would rain down on GC like 40 days
As for staying how long on the web, ay yo I doubt
That I ever started a thread to up my post count
But no worries, tounge in cheek is a familiar concept

I AM STANDING HERE WONDERING HAS ANYONE CHALLENGED ME YET??

[DeltaSigStan]

Gotta step up and try to rap with all of you
Wanna get some props from the Greekchat keystyle crew
So I ask that since this is my very first time
Try to sympathize if you're laughing at this rhyme
I'm San Diego born and I'm San Diego raised
Living in a city where all the college kids are blazed
Member of Delta Sig the best frat at San Diego State
Gonna be on top again so all you haters sit back and wait
Now we're at the point where I'm supposed to talk mad trash
And I'mma try to be more dirty then Marv Albert at a beaver bash
So all the houses at State watch cause now I'm comin at you
Everyone's gonna read about all the shit that you all do
But don't worry everybody cause I will not name names
Cause this all just talk and I don't wanna start any GC games

There's a house out here full of tools and dorks
Delta Sig is fine silverware whereas these bitchs are all sporks
They say they're better than us cause they have more guys
But shit bitch, underneath all that you're full of lies
You see how we won all those awards this year and you did not?
like how we own a brand new mansion? You seen the limo we bought?
Sorry guys, stay in your shack and continue to talk mess
When we're the shit and you're still down there you'll surely hate less

A different house at state is full of preppy kids
Driving porches their dad's bought and sport abercrombie lids
Guys do you think that were you too good for greek week
That only 10 out of 100 guys would show up looking like cloned geeks?
Just because you think you can control repuations
Doesnt mean that you can control greek relations
Why? Cause those girls were too smart for your tricks?
Cause they saw that all you're good for is the coke and the dick?
Please, just because you're big across the USA
Doesn't mean in the grek circle you have complete and total say

Oh! There's this other frat here that spikes girls drinks
So she can pass out and do.....well, what do you think?
I never see you fools on campus so how can you be "all big"?
Ive hope you have the same fate here as those "other sigs"

One final frat that I have to mention
They think because they had a good rush they're in another dimension
Guys, we know that you're all huge now and you wanna talk
How your parties got girls and ours are filled with cock
But remember 418 and our stripper poles?
OUR PARTY BITCH WAS FILLED WITH MUCH MORE HOLE!
By the way, good job at the talent show
But you didnt even place at greek week and we won third...DOH!

And to one of those guys in that house who thinks he's all thug
I'm still the orkin man bitch and you're still a ladybug
You think you can flow and your rhymes are sick?
Theyre not bitch, youre representing a frat full of hicks!
You stand alone cause you're who you are
But trust me dog, that aint gonna get you far
You say you're a superstar an that your songs will be hits?
You worked for days on your stuff but I just threw together this shit
So please, J, you need to go back and practice a while
Take that weak fade of yours, go home, and watch some 8 Mile.

[AlphaGamDiva]

oooooooh...deltasigstan comin in with a vengence!
b2b's rhyme's make me wonder "what is this"
as always, libra-----has got the most flow
KSigRC....well whadoyaknow?
i ain't tryin to come up in here with some mad rhyme
honestly it hurts my head and takes too much time
so don't start on me with my 3rd grade skills
it's up to bro2b to make this place ill
and with that said, libra so did rock ya
after your sick rhymes, she comes in like the docta!

Originally posted by librasoul22
I AM STANDING HERE WONDERING HAS ANYONE CHALLENGED ME YET??

"not i" said the lil squirrel....... and bro2b, just a lil fun.....please don't blow me up.....stay focused on tryin to beat libra!
again, all very impressive!!!

[Bro2B]

I'm not getting that personal because I don't know you. Have you ever battled someone on the yard? In a parking lot? It's cool you can do it written - I'm trying to give you props for that. IF you want examples of what's bitten, check out Canibus at the online hip-hop lyric archive - ohlla.com. Some of it just seems awfully familiar. My friends and I have an informal battle league and the biggest rules that we use are no biting, which I think we all know means using someone else's lines, even if you flip the script a lil bit it's still someone else's idea and they probably spit it better. It's not being defensive, it's just being a hip hop head and listening to all kinds of MCs, whether it's mainstream like 50 is now, or Busdriver, or whoever.

That being said if you want personals, I'll be like you and do a board search so I learn something about you. Writing a personal about me cheering is cool, especially when I'm a graduate and haven't been doing it for a year, and I was on a full scholarship to do something I enjoyed and got to hang out with some cool people doing it. That's the main personal you came with - being a male cheerleader. That's no less admirable than being a femcee. I'll drop something in a little bit, that isn't pre-written (nothing has been pre-written but it's hard to come off the domepiece when it's on the internet and you don't actually know them).

[Bro2B]

I forgot the other big rule - no feeding, i.e. I don't feed off your verse and come back with something off of that and try to flip a better line off of it. There's usually a bar limit too - 10-20 (i.e. 20-40 lines).

Peace.

[librasoul22]

Nah to be honest with you, I am not as good in person as I am writing. Written is of course, way easier. I am familiar with Canibus, yes, but my lyrics are my own. Don't accuse me of biting unless you can name something specific.

I have been battling since I was in middle school. Where I come from it is more like the dozens. I can get real lyrical if you want, but to me a battle gotta burn.

Nothing personal against you at all (like you said, I don't know you), that's just how I do.

As far as "feeding" and what not, there is not an official rule book, lol. When I "feed" it is to personalize my rhymes, not to be lazy. I could be generic and just flow, but where's the battle in that?

Also, as far as bar limits, around here it ain't that serious. Lighten up, lol.

[librasoul22]

Ok...

Since peeps are catching some hurt pride
I tie one hand behind my back and escape from the outside
Did that confuse you?
I draw you a map and still lose you
I got more notebooks than any archeologist can peruse through
Librasoul biting a rhyme? Nah boy, I never steal
I gotta bite your rhyme though to make sure that ish is real
Understand?
On the surface it looks like you might be fading
If I bite all the way through what is underneath waiting?
Bitterness
And really who on GC can blame you?
Another MC wanna step up? Come on you'll get shamed too
It's painful
And honestly I don't know what hurts worse
That you accused me of biting, or how you'll never be Wordsworth
(The MC).

[Bro2B]

Just an experiment in multi's I promised earlier that I wrote out over the past day.

Words visual, quasars and television pixels, 3 dimensional , speed critical , ebonic rhythm ritual , battle scar tissue , procreation competitional , bible truth contradictional , meaning of life not written, but seen within, fate's mastery , hearts exceeding capacity , emotional catastrophe, hate flows like adrenaline in blood rapidly , newly born prophecy , fulfilled impossibly , whose philosophy , makes more sense astonishingly , questions answered interrogatively , basic beliefs darkened positively , heaven and hell exchange geography , in the balance is where we all must be , lives bartered in monopoly , scrutinizing monotony , euthanasia legalized , elderly genocide , assisted suicide , punishment verified , death penalty penalized , ironic shocking , life ending , circle repeating , infinity , just a walk away , nothing is finished , God's forgiveness , spirits enter with quickness , clouds seated to limit , sons being paid a visit , tourists not burned , frostbitten , what's the difference , well I guess it depends on what you believe in... heed the following battle call, tattered shorts of a verse burst, hell all of yall remain enthralled with one mic to unite them all.

[DeltaSigStan]

Remember that guy from 8 Mile named Lotto?
The one Em said he'd get his momma's digits for a dolla tommorow?
You know how Em said that one could understand a word he spoke?
Well, Im telling you now and this is no joke:
There's a guy just like him on GC where you don't understand a thing he types,
I'm talking about Tom Earp! So all of you are bout to hear my gripes
How can you defend a guy who types like he's 13?
He types some of the most incoherent shit I've ever seen
How do his posts, as you say, "make you think?"
If grammar was a crime this guy would be in the clink!
Just because you're old doesn't mean you can't make any sense
I know people decades older whose words can hold you in suspense
That's an insult to those seniors who are smarter than a lot of you
People who still do a lot of the things the youngens do
So please Tommy Boy, don't even try to explain that shit
Cause I for one don't believe your justification, not one single bit
And don't you all come at me for all the shit that I have given Tom
Cause I've talked to a whole lot of you and you said the same shit about that pawn

[DeltaSigStan]

*BUMP*

[KSig RC]

Originally posted by librasoul22
And honestly I don't know what hurts worse
That you accused me of biting, or how you'll never be Wordsworth

In the end, these cheesy lines just make me sigh,
you aren't exactly writing "Expostulation and Reply"
and i feel for ya, girl, 'cause you really try
but there just ain't much behind all these rhymes
so "The Tables Turned" on this battle game
but for keying up lame, you can't be blamed
not everyone here is "The Idiot Boy,"
and that's "The Last of the Flock" on this Wordsworth ploy -
or didn't you understand that crack?
I know that's not what you meant, but i wound it back
'cause what's an MC without some history?
rhyming didn't begin with Talib Kweli
So go ahead and focus on Bro2B
I'll keep dropping shit to make your hands numb,
'cause I have rhyme talent like Dionysus has Dumb
y'all play Dick and Jane like the start of "The Bluest Eye"
while my styles evolving like Jeff Goldblum in "The Fly"
Don't know why you say you wanna play these rhetorical games,
Head's so big it floats over the Macy's parade
But next time you decide to step to me,
read a few lines written over Tinturn Abbey
and if you wanna keep on with this indefinitely,
I'll keep bringing metaphor and similie

done (not bad for a kid with strep)