Transfer Essay

[Senusret I]

It depends on the nature of the story. Just write it all down and have somebody proofread it that can tell you if it's too personal.

[Rubberduckie]

Originally Posted by Senusret I

It depends on the nature of the story. Just write it all down and have somebody proofread it that can tell you if it's too personal.

That's good advice. Also, would you tell someone the story on a first date or at a cocktail party? If not, it may not be the best way to represent you as you apply for college.

[Splash]

Originally Posted by Rubberduckie

That's good advice. Also, would you tell someone the story on a first date or at a cocktail party? If not, it may not be the best way to represent you as you apply for college.

This, except I'd relate it to a job interview. Be personal and professional.