Okay, definite bonus points for use of "copasetic."
But minus points for "shone" instead of "shown". Unless her family is made up of shiny people. That's not even a typo. That's just a really odd grammar mistake.
It's one thing to make a few typos or slip up on your grammar. It's another when it is as noticeable and as frequent as this mistakes are in the OP's posts.
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