New alpha poem , Tell me what you think

[dallas1906]

Hey bruhs, I wrote this new Alpha poem and im looking for some feedback . tell me what you think.


This is my latest work, I call this "An Alpha Man I May Be"

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An Alpha Man I may be
So don't you under estimate me
I have all the qualities you should expect in a man
Intelligent, sophisticated, sexy and in demand
From time to time, I may be known to drop a little knowledge
Unlike others before me, we as Alpha Men graduate college.

You think you know me, but I doubt you understand
How a man of my caliber can teach a race to make a civil stand.
How a man can change history with his words
How a man can express himself despite cruel verbs
How a man can reach beyond the moon and stars
How a man can be political, All-American and act up to par
How a man can serenade crowds with his music
How a man can serve his country and do his duty
How a man can be the King of his tribe,
taking care of his family and passers by.

You think you know me?
You are just beginning to understand.
I also help kids Go-to-Highschool Go-to-College
because kids with knowledge are in high demand.
On a side note, they may Be, or end up marrying an Alpha Man.
I help a nation register to vote.
Because A Voteless People is a Hopeless People
Through Project Alpha, I help boys become men,
teaching them about teen pregnancy,diseases,responsibility, and to Respect other black men.

An Alpha Man I just may be
It's more than having a good time at a club or party
It's about being a man you are intended to be
You have know idea what's it takes to be me
Ask my father, my brother and all my sands
A Man is not a man Until he's an Alpha Man.