This article was posted in the Risk Management forum. I read it through, twice, and although I think what happened to the student who got beaten up is a absolutely horrible thing, I think the article itself looks like it was written by a freshman high school student.
I don't know if it's just the Public Relations major in me, but it's horrible. Everyone knows that when they write formal papers, you never use words such as "didn't", you write "did not".
What do yall think on the style of the article?
PS. if u are posting on the article, please see the Risk Management forum and post there... thanx
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