Rushed for the second time and didn't get a bid

[elizey7]

Hey guys,

So last week was rush week. It was my second time rushing, and, all I can say is I felt less nervous than I did the first time. However, I didn't get a bid, and I'm trying to figure out why. On my application, I listed all 20 organizations I volunteered with over the summer and in the fall, all three clubs I was involved with on campus, and when asked why I was rushing, I was honest and said that I wanted the feeling of a true second family, and lifelong friends; friends who would stalk me to my first date with a guy, friends who would help my future boyfriend/fiancee an awesome proposal, friends who would help me pick out my wedding dress, throw me a bridal shower and baby shower. Does any of that sound too good to be true or too rehearsed, because it is really and honestly what I want, so maybe there's just a better way to rephrase it for next time?

Thanks