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Originally Posted by Silmanarmo
Okay, So I've been working on the Delta Phi Nu website restlessly for the last week. I'm totally shot for idea's! Take a look, and tell me honestly what you think. Anything I shouold add, delete, change etc. NOTE: on the "About" page I haven't uploaded all of the member photo's and Information.
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I'm really not trying to be snarky -- you asked for honest opinions, so here goes.
Get someone who knows what he or she is doing to proof-read and edit everything that goes onto the website. Bad grammar and poor writing don't make a sorority of college women look particularly good. Just the title of this thread and the short opening post repeatedly use apostrophes incorrectly -- a pattern I also see on your "Join Delta Phi Nu" page. (For example, "What about legacy's or Recommendations? - During Recruitment we do not consider legacy's or recommendations. Every girl is considered on a non-bias system." The word is "legacies," not "legacy's.")
Sorry, but when I see writing like is on the webpage, I don't get a very positive image of the group.
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