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Originally Posted by FloridaTish
I'm glad I'm not the only one either...I feel like I am reading the recruitment story of Jessica and Elizabeth Wakefield from the Sweet Valley High books.
It's entertaining to say the least, but I have to say it's a bit off putting how "perfect" everything is and how groomed from birth the OP and her sister were. I'm not saying it is made up, but it's reading like a book and the ostentatious manner in which the OP writes just makes me think that she's tooting her horn a bit loud... Seriously, we get it...
Keep on with the story, though...
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You stole my thoughts exactly... I'm not sure how many petite, size zero, co-valedictorian, varsity cheerleader, blonde-blue eyed and blue blooded identical twins there are out there with a former Miss America runner up as their doting mom... I've no doubt that today they're successful identical twin attorneys at daddy's law firm. Nice story, but that's all it is. Love the part about the hokey PNM as comic relief. That's just textbook. LOL. It reminds me the teen novel fan fiction my girlfriends and I used to write when we were in middle school.
I miss Sweet Valley High! Is the OP supposed to be Liz or Jess? I wonder if Lyndsay is code for "Lila." Aren't they supposed to be joining the Unicorns, the hippest secret clique in school?
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