New alpha poem , Tell me what you think

[dallas1906]

Hey bruhs, I wrote this new Alpha poem and im looking for some feedback . tell me what you think.


This is my latest work, I call this "An Alpha Man I May Be"

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An Alpha Man I may be
So don't you under estimate me
I have all the qualities you should expect in a man
Intelligent, sophisticated, sexy and in demand
From time to time, I may be known to drop a little knowledge
Unlike others before me, we as Alpha Men graduate college.

You think you know me, but I doubt you understand
How a man of my caliber can teach a race to make a civil stand.
How a man can change history with his words
How a man can express himself despite cruel verbs
How a man can reach beyond the moon and stars
How a man can be political, All-American and act up to par
How a man can serenade crowds with his music
How a man can serve his country and do his duty
How a man can be the King of his tribe,
taking care of his family and passers by.

You think you know me?
You are just beginning to understand.
I also help kids Go-to-Highschool Go-to-College
because kids with knowledge are in high demand.
On a side note, they may Be, or end up marrying an Alpha Man.
I help a nation register to vote.
Because A Voteless People is a Hopeless People
Through Project Alpha, I help boys become men,
teaching them about teen pregnancy,diseases,responsibility, and to Respect other black men.

An Alpha Man I just may be
It's more than having a good time at a club or party
It's about being a man you are intended to be
You have know idea what's it takes to be me
Ask my father, my brother and all my sands
A Man is not a man Until he's an Alpha Man.

[Love_Spell_6]

Originally posted by dallas1906
Hey bruhs, I wrote this new Alpha poem and im looking for some feedback . tell me what you think.


This is my latest work, I call this "An Alpha Man I May Be"

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An Alpha Man I may be
So don't you under estimate me
I have all the qualities you should expect in a man
Intelligent, sophisticated, sexy and in demand
From time to time, I may be known to drop a little knowledge
Unlike others before me, we as Alpha Men graduate college.

You think you know me, but I doubt you understand
How a man of my caliber can teach a race to make a civil stand.
How a man can change history with his words
How a man can express himself despite cruel verbs
How a man can reach beyond the moon and stars
How a man can be political, All-American and act up to par
How a man can serenade crowds with his music
How a man can serve his country and do his duty
How a man can be the King of his tribe,
taking care of his family and passers by.

You think you know me?
You are just beginning to understand.
I also help kids Go-to-Highschool Go-to-College
because kids with knowledge are in high demand.
On a side note, they may Be, or end up marrying an Alpha Man.
I help a nation register to vote.
Because A Voteless People is a Hopeless People
Through Project Alpha, I help boys become men,
teaching them about teen pregnancy,diseases,responsibility, and to Respect other black men.

An Alpha Man I just may be
It's more than having a good time at a club or party
It's about being a man you are intended to be
You have know idea what's it takes to be me
Ask my father, my brother and all my sands
A Man is not a man Until he's an Alpha Man.

FYI
Is your stuff copyrighted? Cause this stuff willl end up in so many forwards..and people will claim this as their own.. be careful what you post on a public message board.

Nice poem BTW.

[Senusret I]

Frat, I am a poet....please send me a PM if you want a critique.

Just make sure you post your real name every time you post or email the poem. Your work is copyrighted as soon as you write it, and the good thing about poetry is that no one really ever makes money off of it, so even if someone did "steal" it...not like they'd be stealing money out of your pocket.

[RBL]

That was a great poem