What should i do?

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Hi all-

I am going through formal recruitment in 2 weeks at the university of tampa. I wanted to know if this sounded pretentious or not. I know at one point or another I am going to be asked why i decided i wanted to be in a sorority i just wanted to know if you all thought this sounded like a good answer because its honestly why i want to be in a sorority!

I attended a small all girls high school. There were 52 of us in my class and we bonded so much of the years and essentially became a family. I love the fact that we still do class emails back and forth to each other and I want to find another home away from home at UT. I've always known I wanted to be in a sorority. Bonding with the girls in my grade allowed me to see a little glimpse of how that would be.

I truly feel like this but i don't want to sound like i made it up. Your thoughts are appreciated.