I wrote this poem tell me if its any good

[luckysmileslssu]

SWEET ANGEL
As I sit and wait I wonder if we are ever going to meet
I think of all the time we spend together talking and thinking
Not only do we laugh when together we love
When apart the feeling is stronger and the thoughts more forthcoming
We think back to how or what brought the two of us together
But all that comes to mind is that we together as one is truly something
special
Both not afraid to express their true selves feeling in total awe when the
presence of one another is in
Only looking forward to the night time dream where both hope and pray
each other is there
Waking the next morn to the thought of one another feeling all warm inside
only to go the day awaiting of one another
Neither falter both in total love of each sole only awaiting the midnight
dream which is called the meeting of one another


Feel free to comment...thanks..

[DGPhoney]

Very Nice Poem. Very creative and artisitic. Do you write poetry often? Or was this just something you were trying out? Either way good job
DGPhoney~

[luckysmileslssu]

Thank You very much..yes i write poetry often..something i do to relax and get things off my mind....I recommend everyone should try it... thanks a bunch

[DGPhoney]

thats a good point, i never thought about poetry as a relaxtion method thats kinda neat
Good Job`
DGPhoney

[SigmaChiCard]

luckysmileslssu, I enjoyed your poetry a great deal, I'm glad that you have understood how to use poetry as a catharsis...I can fully apreciate that conceptually, as I do the same. Continue to write, and continue to post it, if I come up with something good sometime, I'll post one of mine

Cory

[SigmaChiCard]

I knew from the beginning of this saga
That crystal clusters are fair-weather lovers
And that the wrath of Father Time’s hand
Is more deadly to a soul than
Any assortment of Arms

Dreams decompose into sob stories
When their God is the same
Of that of their pretenses
Five Senses know not of thought, or
Feeling, or Compassion, yet I know
Fully of passion and I thought the
Feeling was reciprocated

So complicated situations these days
Who knew that the Bank of time that
We’ve invested so many hours of late
Would so quickly gain me the interest
That I have acquired
Compounding, like a fracture, continuously,
My Heart, and it’s with time,
Once again, that I fade away.

[amycat412]

This one's been published--- (yay me! LOL)

TULIPS
10/14/98

Its not over forever
its just over for now, you
Said and my blood ran cold
Despite the warmth of the Summer
Sun on my back.

I looked away from your eyes and
Saw the beauty of the place, the
beautiful garden you chose to
break my heart in.
The tulips were everywhere.
Purple and Pink and Yellow and impossibly
Green.
They danced naively in the breeze
Happy just to be alive.

I looked back at you and tried not
to hear the words you spoke
I sent a silent Prayer to the tulips
Please, give me just a little bit
of your absolute Joy, just
Enough to get me through this
Day.

You wanted Time. Needed Time.
To get your life together, you said.
But time is not kind and time does not
Wait for anyone. Least of all
You who has broken my heart before
and who would likely do it again if I gave
You half a chance.

I looked to the tulips for inspiration and
Found the strength I needed in their
Joyous reach for the sun. No. I said to
You who only a short time ago I called my
Love and my life. This time I will not
Wait. This time I am going to walk
Away and when the sun sets on this
Day, so it will set on us.