Help: I need a Line...(and a name)

Miss. Mocha · #1 06-09-2004, 12:47 AM

I know that there are a lot of writers on GC. I myself am an unpublished author, who has completed two manuscripts (and I am in the process of shopping 1 of them to a literary agent). I need help as only the people on GC can give me.

Here's the set-up

The main character's name is Passion (long story, don't even ask. You'll understand once the book comes out).

Passion is out at a neighborhood bar & she is approached by a scrub -type guy. I need a good & original comment that an off the chain type brother would make when somebody tells him that her name is Passion. I plan to use the best one, & I will give MAD shout outs in the "acknowledgements".

Also, I need a catchy name for a Hair & Nail Salon. The one I'm currently using in the book is Hot Headz Hair & Nails.

Thanks in advance.

#2 06-09-2004, 12:58 AM

Name of salon

C.L.A.W.S

Cuts
Layers
And
Wayout
Styles

#3 06-09-2004, 01:00 AM

Is that the Glass heels kinda Passion or every Thug's Passion?

#4 06-09-2004, 01:01 AM

Him: Passion right?

Her: yeah

Him: Can I put my fingas in your drink?

#5 06-09-2004, 01:03 AM

Name of Salon

Afroerotique

#6 06-09-2004, 01:05 AM

Name of Salon

Afrodisiac Nail and Hair Store,
We make your Man want you more

#7 06-09-2004, 01:07 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by laidbackfella
Name of Salon

Afrodisiac Nail and Hair Store,
We make your Man want you more

Hmmm, i just thought about it thats the name of a salon here.

9nmac04dst · #8 06-09-2004, 09:49 AM

Fine Art International Salon- We Make a Way Out of No Way!!!!!!!!!!!

NiaX · #9 06-09-2004, 02:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by laidbackfella
Him: Passion right?

Her: yeah

Him: Can I put my fingas in your drink?

.....I am so dead off of this......hawt darn!

LOL!!!!

delph998 · #10 06-09-2004, 02:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by laidbackfella
Name of salon

C.L.A.W.S

Cuts
Layers
And
Wayout
Styles

I actually like that name, frat. The only thing I would change is the Wayout in W to something like like Wild Styles or something like that.

#11 06-09-2004, 03:49 PM

Line - " I have a thirst for Passion " or something to that extent

vanda · #12 06-09-2004, 04:08 PM

Thug- "So your name is passion. Can I taste your passion fruit?"

#1 Leading Lady · #13 06-09-2004, 04:23 PM

Hair and Nail Salon ~
Designs to Make You Fine Beauty and Nail Salon

Line from a thug....still thinking will comeback later

Cali_Keisha · #14 06-09-2004, 07:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by vanda
Thug- "So your name is Passion. Can I taste your passion fruit?"

I promise I was thinking that same thing when I read what she needed a line for. The only difference was I was going to say I bet you taste like passion fruit.

Miss. Mocha · #15 06-09-2004, 07:44 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by laidbackfella
Him: Passion right?

Her: yeah

Him: Can I put my fingas in your drink?

This line is MAD hilarious to me. Every time I read it, I die laughing. But I don't understand what Passion being her name has to do with him putting his fingers in her drink. I should've prefaced that by saying that I am sometimes VERY naive, so maybe my mind just doesn't work like yours.