[Gyrl7]

Originally posted by CrimsonTide4
Good plot so far but I need for someone to teach Michael Baisden and his editors how to EDIT. I am getting tired of authors having 99 errors. This man put "a odd" "sombodies"


AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH

I don't profess to be perfect with my grammar but the COMMON stuff will be on point. Those infractions listed above are COMMON. Oh and he wrote BREATHE instead of BREATH!! WTH

Lawd lawd lawd. . . Olivia is a trip but no worse than Baisden's grammar and editing skills.

Girl you betta say it! I am so tired of forming my own dam sentences to read his books, because his writing is so po sometimes!.......