You're a Sigma Chi? So is my Hubby. You get an automatic 10 points right off the bat!
I think, if you are in life as you are in your writing, you have a level head and other qualities women find attractive.
What I liked the most was how you spoke of the "other" guy.
No put-downs or below the belt punches. Lots of women out there looking for those qualities.
You WILL find one (heck, more than ONE!) Be gentle!