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He's trying a whole new approach to the Brown essay. Part of it sounded really stilted. It's funny- he did the same thing with the Common App essay at first. Then he scrapped the whole thing and did an essay that really expressed who he was.
Thanks KDCat. I'm trying to provide some guidance but not take over the process. This has to be HIS thing. These essays need to be HIS voice, but his true voice, not the voice of some scholar trying to convince an adcon that they should admit him. It's really hard to find that balance.
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