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Originally Posted by Jess1994
I typically use better writing than what I have shown here. Actually,I have always received an "A" grade in English and writing classes.
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suggested edits. Probably could be tightened up more.
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"One of the painful things about our time is that those who feel certainty are stupid, and those with any imagination and understanding are filled with doubt and indecision." Bertrand Russell, The Triumph of Stupidity
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