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Originally Posted by LaneSig
Is that the critique you are looking for?
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Yes it is.
That was very helpful, everything you said made sense.
Like I said though, these
are random videos that I cut together. This Pilot is
not exactly reflective of the final product I intended to create, it is merely a concept. How at all would I be able to make a plot from random videos I shot of my friends and I doing stupid shit? Ya kno. But I had the idea and didnt wanna forget it so I trew this together.
The point was to show an idea, or premise. This show will have drunk antics, video games, vlogging, music performances, and you might learn a thing or two as well (geo cashing bit).
I think that makes sense. Please share it with your friends and org members.
If we decide to move fwd with this project the show will have much more focus, a real narrative, and actual characters obviously.