the entire section entitled "we rage" just needs to go. at least where i'm from, raging has the connotation of getting black out drunk and behaving in ways that you do not want associated with your sorority at recruitment. a FEW shots of dancing, formal, etc. are okay, but the multiple shots of slutty halloween costumes are not. the paper hat picture quite frankly smacks of hazing - as a PNM, I would think that NMs are made to do embarrassing stuff like that before initiation. as far as song selection goes, the songs are fun and upbeat, but since you're only using clips of them, i think it's best if you use the pieces of the song that aren't explicitly talking about "getting slizzered" etc.
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