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Originally Posted by MysticCat
Well, to begin with, it's a run-on sentence. A period or a semicolon is needed after us.
Then there's the fact that revamped is one word, not two.
But mainly, I liked bare. Unless you're asking everyone to disrobe with you, the word is bear, not bare.  |
LOL I didn't even notice that!! I will let the webmaster know, thanks for catching that. He has been busy working on the site I bet he hasn't even caught it.