[DoubleTDG]

That was one of my reasons for joining a sorority as well, but the answer can be viewed as a standard answer for people who are not freshman going through rush (I was one of them). I would suggest sitting down and doing some serious thinking on how you can make the answer more personal. Please do not take what I am saying as rude because I know that the answer is a valid one, but honest answers from the heart that have been thought through are really good.