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I just read (most of) this tonight, and I have to say aprocess is a good storyteller. I am into this story.
...BUT! I'm starting to feel like I'm watching Friday the 13th XXI. The story started off well and seemed unique because it's so different and ...honest. Now, I'm getting all these filler sequels that leave you disappointed. Seriously, we're reaching a point where good storytelling with lessons learned and emotional twists starts to nosedive in the name of suspense and dragging it out. Unnecessary.
Seriously (and politely), please finish the story in 2 - 3 more segments. Please?
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