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much, much more readable . agree that the lei is a little lost right now and brighter colors and more deliniated outline of the lei might help it "pop".
maybe a little grass shack at the edge of the water with a surfboard leaning against a wall and a woody parked nearby. palm trees too.
and since we all helped out, can we come?
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I live in Fantasyland and I have waterfront property.
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