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Wait - weren't you the one that said that the nickname Fiji is gay and your chapter doesn't use it??
Other than that, I think the whole design is amazingly cliche and cheesy.
If you insist on it though (yes, I know you suggested above that you'd be willing to scrap it, but I have a feeling you'll come back and defend every crticism of it, which says otherwise)...as others have suggested - change the font. The only other thing you MIGHT add is either a palm tree or a lime. One or the other though, because ottherwise it's going to get cluttered.
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