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Old 01-03-2008, 05:28 PM
MysticCat MysticCat is offline
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I would echo what Senusret said.

Also, I would in use the formal name of the fraternity at least once, and I would either embed a hyperlink to the national fraternity's webpage, like this:

"Acacia Fraternity, the international social fraternity without Greek letters, will be recruiting prospective members on January 9 through 17."

or I would include a link to the national website at the bottom with other links.

I also think you need a stronger ending than "you are not committing yourself to anything by showing up" -- go with something more positive, like "Come see what we're all about" or "Come see what makes us different from the rest."
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