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Can I just take a minute to point out that the OP was not so much asking for an answer to the question of "why XZY?" but some advice on how to present her answer without sounding desparate. I got the impression she was asking about style, not content.
Now, I am not in the D9, so I don't know if that is still an inappropriate thing to ask, but maybe she already knows that she doesn't have the most polished communication skills, and wants some help.
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