Awesome! I'm sure your cousin's slightly biased but gave you good advice all around nonetheless! (I know I can't help but say things like "They're all great chapters... but I think mine's the best!) Do be sure to make judgements based off your own observations as well as what she told you!
But to continue the cheering theme in the AI threads...
RAH RAH
SIS BOOM BAH
GOOooooooooooo KITKAT!
and
Give her a break
Give her a break
Give her a break because she's
Kit Kat mac
Ok I'm a dork and done now
