Corinna,
I think your letter sounds great. The only thing that you may want to change is using the words "girls"...NPC likes "women". To them it just sounds more mature I guess. But other then that I think it is awesome that you are doing this. I wish I could even come help you!!! Good Luck with everything. and let us know if you have any questions. Oh, and please let us know what NPC says!
-Maggie
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