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Non-SK Poems
I know there are more of us than just me that write poems.. Please share some!! I'd like to, but y'all know I'm not going first. :p
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Ill go first ... ME ME!!! just dont laugh
.... Amy laughed ... no more poem sorry! .... amy said she was sorry ... so the poem is back .... I look deep into your eyes, our hearts pull us closer the electricity between us is dangerous as I stare at your gentle lips and into those gourgeous eyes I cant think of anything but you ... amazing, beautiful, sexy you My lips begin to quiver as I look for even a little bit of courage But your magenetic presence beats my shyness any day I look deeply into your eyes and our foreheads touch, and then our noses and slowly my lips softly meet yours and for that second the world stops, time stops, my heart stops, our mouths slowly open as that second seems to become an eternity Your soft pink tongue against mine feels like its gliding along glass I felt like I was traveling into my heart the deeper we kissed and the longer we kissed the harder it was to pull away your kiss is vicious taking over my body with no intention to let go my mind is consumed in this kiss and I am in peace kissing you KISSING YOU |
Phew...Now that I don't have stage fright from going first (tehe), I'll post a few...But one at a time to make reading easier.
"I See the You " 1-4-2000 in our wonderful world of kill or be killed, baby the world acts as a vampire.. sucks you dry if you don't pay attention too much is how much I cared and where did it get me? NOWHERE your house, your home where you like them to be nowhere to rob them of their sanity all in the master plan or maybe just your head feed off of them until you're sure they're dead puppetmaster of them all I see your strings and I've cut free |
"Incense " 11-4-99
he had a presence like incense burning smoldering but never really on fire sizzled and popped every now and then but eventually just went out i was a flame once roaring and blzing ready to take over the world it appears that i've slowly been put out but the fire inside is still angry it just needs to be rekindled |
Last one for now..
last one for now...no name or date
out of nowhere this angel came with crystalline eyes to save this dame a bright light in this darkness ....a fountain of content on my heart he put a harness happy where he is here, there, anywhere makes me happy too i wish he was aware of what he does to me brings me so much joy.. how did this happen ?? after all, he IS only a boy! |
And sometimes its like a dull blade cutting away at your nerves
Sometimes its like a hammer striking each one But either way it stings, bleeds, hurts for a while Until it goes numb. Then when the tears fall you hardly notice And when your head aches your mind just shuts down Though your eyes are red and burning you don't even blink The days go on and so do you Though your soul doesn't follow It waits until it goes numb © Aquastar |
Yay Cara!!! I wish I could write like that!
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You can write like that ames!! I love your poems!!
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Got any more where that came from, Cara?? I might dig some more out :)
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I have several poems that I could share, this is the only one I have a copy available to me while @ work. Its really personal, written during the most depressing period of my life, so don't laugh or criticize please.
I used to think that I could fix everything Not for selfish reasons but because I love you all so much But now I realize that no matter how hard I try Not everything in this world can be fixed But it still doesn't change the fact That I'm still your best friend And that I still have the ability To make things worse I know that you are all having problems And I would give my life If I thought it would make a difference But what if I'm part of your problem? How will I ever know better? How am I supposed to read your mind? How am I going to be your best friend If you won't help yourself first? All I want to do is be here for you But right now I think that its best To disappear from your life The last thing I want to be is the problem And since you won't tell me whats wrong But I can see it in your eyes Since you don't trust anyone but strangers What am I supposed to think? It hurts me when I can't help you More than you'll ever know But it hurts me more now that I may be at least part of the problem Don't you care that when You are in pain I am as well? I'm sorry. I'm so incredibly sorry. |
Tear jerker!! LOVE IT!
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I think i've always desperately wanted to be in love. to be in the kind of love they have in the movies. the kind of love that makes everyone around you wish they were you...so much that it almost makes you sick. So much that you glow because you are so happy. I've realized it's the little things in life that make you happy...not the things that you can buy...but the stupid little things like a good book, picked flower, or a silly picture. A smile can change your day. Feelings are contagious, especially when around those you love. Nothing can fix problems faster then your bed and a night of sleep. A haircut can change your entire life. A new pair of shoes can make you feel pretty...even if they only go on your feet. A picture can bring up a thousand memories. Letters that once meant the world to you, can later only rip you up inside. A year is a long time, that really only feels like a few minutes when it's gone. You will never forget the first love of your life. Sometimes crying is good. I love the rain. And right now, i think i'm glowing....
It's not really a poem...but kinda...lol |
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