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Poetry
I know we've got a few poets around here, so I wanted to start this up...there's a really old one somewhat like this, but I want a new one, so I'm mkaing it....hope you head GC people don't mind. ;)
Here's mine....Every poet out there needs to contribute. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Stars of My Life “ Rhyme without reason Brings repercussions En routes hail storms Through your Soul form Chilling the ventricles Housing the desires Of your soul My rhyme was to the beat Of treason Two Seasons Found me meandering About the stars Confusing Venus for Mars Mistaking my past for my future When I should have been Concerning myself with now Though you’re with me At the present time Via the wonders of my mind And my imagination I’m living life Loving a ghost A transfigurant recreation Of love’s fickle fancy Mistaking my past for my future? Nothing is ever SO certain Except that to me You are a present And that Love lines Last life times And stars shine In your eyes Quixotic celestial skies Like an infinite abyss Of mystery Combed with beauty Stealthily piercing my person Collecting the contents of my soul When I look into the sky I see what comprises me That I exist in uncertainty But certainly My future yields a path That merges with your own Let it be known That I see you As my Soul mate My sole fate Is to be with you forever And a week There’s nothing more to life I seek You are my every reason Yes, You are my entire train of thought The contentment I’ve sought I’ve found In your eyes Those quixotic celestial skies. ” |
a 2nd one.
Apollo 86 “ She Sits Across From Me As We Recite Our Life Stories Into Two Streams Of Drifting Smoke Like Star Dust Traveling Through Space Always Stumbling Always Falling Up Like It's All Fucked-Up Twirling Together Unifying As A Cyclone Unicycling It's Way Around All Fucked-Up Maybe That's Why They Came Together It's A Drunken Hook-Up Maybe It's A Sign Damn, I Wish I Had My Magic Eight Ball I Could Ask If It's A Sign Then I Could Assign To Myself Plans For My Future But Instead I'm Havin' To Try To Figure Her Out And She's So Damn Vacant Or Maybe Just Well-Hidden I Explore this Maybe-Vacancy Through Her Eyes Using All My Fuel To Get Here Cause Now That I'm Here I Need It No Longer So I Release The Tank And In A Minute It's Gone But Where Did It Go? If There Was Nothing Else Out Here I'd Still Be Able To See It, Right? So This MuthaFucka Ain't Vacant And Now Parts Of Me Are Hiding Behind Hidden Parts Of Her Playing Team Hide-And-Go-Seek Me Against Her And Me Now I Wanna Go Home Cause Everybody's Gotta Go Back To Home Base Sometime But I Can't They Musta Put An Obstacle In My Way So That They'd Get Back First Then She And I would Have To Switch Partners And I'd Have To Start All Over Looking For Myself With Someone Else. Maybe After Time I'd Find Myself With Someone Else And I Would Win But Would I Really Be Winning At All? Cause The Other Part Of Me Would Be Looking Just As I'd Been Looking And So Would She Be Looking And We'd Always Be Traveling On Anti-Parallel Paths On Roadway's, The Audobon Most Likely Always Going Straight Ahead Quickly The Way We Should Go Getting Further And Further Away From Each Other And Getting Further And Further Away From Each Other Man, I Don't Wanna Search My Whole Life But Shit, I Don't Wanna Hide My Whole Life Either Not Behind Any Woman Not Behind Any Woman Who Is Hiding From Me I Fall Out Of That Space Between Her Ears, That Not-So-Vacant Space Behind Her Face, In The Form Of A Tear Although Maybe It Was Just A Damp Memory Like One of Those Real Sad Rainy Days With No Romantic Qualities At All Cause I Mean The Only Reason I Fell Is Cause She Quit Making Room For Me Kid, I Was Holdin On Like A MuthaFucka If I'd Seen It Comin' I Woulda Grabbed My Ropes And Hooks I Woulda Been Hookin All Over Tha Place For Stability Like All Her Friends Do But Fuck It I Fell But Got A Present When I Hit As Compensation Cause I Hit Hard My Present Was The Present My Present Was Now These Words I Write Are Presents As These Words I Write Re present Me Now Cause B4 When I Looked Into The Future I saw A3 Written Backwards I Was Lookin' Tha Wrong Way My Future Was The Past Reflected My Future was The Past Refracted My Future Is The Present, Past Subtracted And I know My Now Has No Worries Cause My Tomorrow Reflected Over My Yesterday Gives Me A Much Clearer Screen With Which To Watch My Now And That Makes Me Very Fuckin' Happy. ” |
Here are a few of my own:
A Box We are all caged animals, frightened and trapped, in a tight cold box; in a dark box. Hate and violence graffitied on the walls. Little air holes for some escape, and some clean air. Giant glaring eyes, jealous, deep, insensitive stares, peek in and watch us. The box is opened, we fill it up, and anger and hate take a form It creeps over the edges and smiles with a hatred grin it quits smiling and soaks into our heads. Hate in the mind. How far will you take it? How far will it go. So we act like animals, barred in this world, caged with violence, sharing crowds; and overcrowded party. So let's all party. Throw around some words, and make some people cry, let the hatred once again come alive. Actually, I will leave it at that for now.. |
so damasa & I are the lone poetry-composers? I sincerely doubt that....I least I sincerely hope not. We stand before you exposed, allowing you into our heart's mind....return the favor...
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I do believe it is out of sheer intimidation that none have posted. One may fear paling in comparison to such talent.
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OK, I'll bite - and I'll drop a couple more when I get home
---- Have we no shame? Could it be, that trapped inside that brain you'll come to find that thing that we all feared you wouldn't, even as I felt you as you be? As the saying goes - Fool me once, shame on me - fool me twice, well, to be perfectly honest I knew better anyway- No joy in filling in the rest. Abide well this, See everything that may be - only when you have found that which makes you less, can you find that which ultimately makes you free. And I shall take it to the banal, but make it seem so far from coarse, or perhaps I just say that to feel better - but honestly, don't forget the horse you rode in on. |
STAB
stab
(March 7, 2001) pierce my flesh with the shards of your broken promises slash at my heart with the blades of your l’s look listen like love club me with the heaviness of your lies never, ever, forever and when you’ve done all that nail my coffin shut with the dots in your i’s i am not the one i am not the one you might love me with all you got but what you got is not enough i cannot live like this betrayal with a kiss betrayal with your lips i could wonder whether you loved my body before you loved my mind but it doesn’t matter as the body was given up by the mind in exchange for love but the mind doesn’t understand even after countless experiences that i can’t make you love me with my body because my body cant keep you you say you love me with all you got but what you got just ain’t enough for me because i have inhaled men who promised me more and i have been with men who done me better maybe i got entranced by your eyes enthralled by your lies and by the music i was hypnotized but i hope you don’t love me because i ate you out the best and i hope you don’t love me because you might get a poem written about you and i’m not saying i’m stronger than you but you don’t have to worry about my blood on your hands so pierce my flesh with the shards of your broken promises slash at my heart with the blades of your l’s look listen like love club me with the heaviness of your lies never, ever, forever and when you’ve done all that nail my coffin shut with the dots in your i’s i am not the one i am not the one i must now love you with all i got left because all i got is the words you left me i create my weapons with those words i exact my revenge with those phrases i lure you into the land mines of my mind and your world evaporates into nothingness because you forgot and slipped on my simile and i exchange your body for your mind because i gave up my body for your mind but it doesn’t matter that the mind doesn’t understand because now i have no body now i have no mind i am verse and verse needs but a voice you cannot love me with all you got because all you got is the shadow of a fraction of what you think love is and that for damn sure ain’t enough just as my body wasn’t enough to capture your mind and your mind wasn’t enough to tame my verse and my verse still can’t change your lies and i hope you don’t remember me because i wrote a poem about you and i hope this doesn’t make you love me remember me because i was the voice the unspoken word that made you say “i wonder what he’s doing now” so pierce my flesh with the shards of your broken promises slash at my heart with the blades of your l’s look listen like love club me with the heaviness of your lies never, ever, forever and when you’ve done all that nail my coffin shut with the dots in your i’s i am not the one i am not the one |
THIS IS RATED R
THE FOLLOWING POEM IS RATED R. NO CHILDREN UNDER SEVENTEEN WITHOUT A PARENT OR GUARDIAN
black light fandango (March 28, 2001) dear sir and ma’am: under the black light everything felt right bet you wished it could have lasted all night three parts and three hearts and no false starts on that night (this is no explication but a dedication to him and her and me) three thirsty souls in the center of a sea of bodies like two sharks we encircled her obeying the Miami bass we grinded and freaked and grinded and freaked like ticking and tocking like a grandfather you’d been clocking like the sucking and fucking that you wished you were doing her and me at the same time so when we came together (to dance) you got a snake in your hips and started to prance because you’d never been in a circle of three degrees a circle of amour but you didn’t know what was in store it was just a fucking party and we were just freaking this girl this girl was the last one on earth because she gave me my first hard on in years and i had no fears, even if “oh, shit! what if I am straight?” through the stench of cigarettes and sweat, i still made you and her wet we encircled her and you touched my arm and i touched your hand and suddenly we three understand that if ever something like this was to happen it could only be her, you, and me and only that night and the crowd disappears around us and all that’s left is the black light stranding us in the inky, infinite sea - i just see her, you, and me i touch you, you touch me, we touch she but does she even need to be there for you to know that I am aware of the erectile function touching our conjunction we are fucking each other through her but does she feel pricked, does she ride it, does she feel like a queen inspiring the manhood of two to arise in between you cannot look me in the eyes because you know that i have caused this show we each had someone else but they didn’t know that she was the only woman that could make me think twice and i was the only man that could make you think twice but twice plus twice is nice only when its thrice we were live we were hype we were the essence of sex raw energy bubbling under skin threatening to explode as the fluid crowd evaporated you and you and i, he and she and me, girl and guy and guy we are free love: me |
Damn son :eek: that shit was brilliant
And the uncontested winner is: dardenr |
Thanks, I try!
Sent you a PM. |
I hope you guys have copyrights. It would be easy for some one to plagarize on the web. I liked them all.
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