LOL, serious...do you think your rhymes were better than mine?

Umm, I honestly don't really care...

lol..
I said I wouldn't entertain, but someone's disillusioned
I asked you to refrain, but your in a "state of confusion"
Don't use that tired excuse, you know you tried your hardest
"Artists make up words all the time", well guess what?
You're no artist
And if you're so comfortable with your rhyme, why'd u change it?
If I were you I'd reexamine that whole sh*t, then rearrange it
Now focus on this thread and let my writing hypnotize you
Let your breathing vaporize and your tears crystallize, too
Take a deep breath and step away from this topic
I'm really trying to do YOU a favor, so just drop it

I thought you weren't going to entertain me anymore lol. It's entertaining though, like someone watching a monkey play an accordian on the street.

Oh, I thought "I don't really care" would translate into dropping it.

You outdid me on rhyming on a chat forum because of one wrong word, hope your life has a little more significance now. :)

lol.

Dude, if you really didn't care you would quit posting your whiny comments.

:)

You still talking?

Alright, damn...this is getting stupid.. What started out as a funny/talented freestyle thing turned into an entire page of 'You're stupid', "Nuh uh, YOU are!!'.. LOL..... Let's get back to the flows!

Wondering if we can disregard the whining of a few posts ago and get back to freestyling? I liked this thread.

(damasa, where ya at? Don't make me call you out! ;) :D)