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Optimist Prime 04-22-2003 04:04 PM

Witnesses to mayem, chaos and violence
Hotter than preachers in big circus tents
looking around for my enemy and rivial
step into O-Prime's Old-Time revivial
I refuse to lose to your crews or your packs
When I come all in fun, you look dumb, watch your backs
I won't always be here to look out for my peeps
so be warned what I tell you watch out for the creeps
Those that would poision my people can't live
but if you're my people much love I will give
But to those who are neutral and sit on the fence
One word of advice: go get some defence

Optimist Prime 04-22-2003 04:15 PM

I thought that I feel in love on a very magic night
When everyone that I loved had a very nasty fight
You were there for me and I held you in my arms
Some how we both felt safe, from the world and its harms
Of all the places I've been and all the things I've seen
I've never seen nothing expect for in a magazine
we fell asleep together and when I woke up from the nap
I turned on your CD so I could hear Ice Cube rap
West Side, East Side, all around the town
We're gonna make a little magic when the sun starts going down
I wax the didatic and me and mammy o'rourke
are gonna trip the light fantastic on the sidewalks of new york
I'll sing you a love song for the love that should have been
I'll sing about the sickness that took the sweet life of a friend
I'll sing about American just like Mr. Huges before
I'll sing about the Victors and the Soilders of My War
Nevermind the bollocks because my thoughts are here to stay
Nevermind the buzzcock because I can't come out to play
Nevermind what's normal or what others lable strange
Nevermind the discord, nothing's out of my range
I'll travel the world and tell you all I see
I'll travel to your homeland if you will wait there for me
I'll walk around the country and when I feel the devil's fork
We'll take a walk together on the sidewalks of New York
I'll travel every road and on the streets where you live
I'll give you all that I can, but there's nothing left to give
Nevermind the madness that is spewing from my mouth
I'll take a shower in New Jersey, I got dirty in the south
Maybe I'll play the love game and maybe this time I'll win
If not I'll just lurk late and inspire Gwyndelion
If I was the savior, then could I eat beef or pork?
I preach the balance of salvation on the sidewalks of New York

librasoul22 04-22-2003 04:24 PM

Bro2b,

In my universe you inhale a verse and you exhale a rhyme,
And if you breathe rhymically you'll disperse something divine,
When I sleep I snore metaphors, when I eat I vomit lyrics,
When I died you read my rhyme and you conjured up my spirit.
They invented the exponent to make my IQ more precise
I prevented my last opponent from thinking once, much less twice


Me and my fellow GCers are underwhelmed at what we're reading
Maybe you should just stick to what you do best - cheerleading
My flow was so hot, last night it shut GC down,
Your skills are like my aftermath: 404, they're not found

Next.

Peaches-n-Cream 04-22-2003 04:53 PM

librasoul, there is a grammy in your future. :)

Bro2B 04-22-2003 05:35 PM

If you honestly think that would win at a battle, you are sadly mistaken.

And a lot of your stuff is played/bitten - like the 404 line, I have heard that so many times. Keep droppin' that knowledge...

Bro2B 04-22-2003 05:44 PM

It ain't lucky my flow's destructive and tumbles off the tongue so seductive
You're surprised my verses are terse and it's holdin ya captive
I got a captive audience so forgive me as I put in my two cents
This verse ain't spurious, but you're bi-curious and my poetic copiousness is intense
My rhymes are like when you have sex, usually over in less than a minute
Body's turning inside out because he had an orgasm and (GASP) you didn't
You call yourself a woman, but you'll keep sayin "I'm with the band"
Sorry you aren't feelin so fresh, but you'll like the odor of your own brand
I'ma get off this topic, just droppin it so here's where I'll digress
Ya flow is sorry, your level is more like "highlights" not "reader's digest"
I get the feeling it's not talent you have, but techno-savvy to copy& paste
I asked ya boy bout his first blowjob, like hey, how'd it taste?
Don't cry though as we're here near the end of this verbal twister
It's a fact with this attack I could say I'm tighter than your little sister
But I'll drop something original now, which you won't do for days, even weeks
At the end of my rhyme, this very line, means I'm tighter than two butt cheeks

Peaches-n-Cream 04-22-2003 05:55 PM

I like this:
your level is more like "highlights" not "reader's digest" :)

KSig RC 04-22-2003 06:25 PM

Some have spent too long on the inter-web
Playing word games made up in her head
I won't give the time of day when we play these silly charades,
turn you away like gays at a st paddy's parade
i'm not impressed with your best, no matter how it's dressed
there's no flesh, all you have is syncopation at best
while the rest hoot and holler at a baller-to-be
showing off big words like it's the SAT
honestly i don't see a sixteen hundred for you
just getting light-headed like tylenol cold & flu
some talk about it while the others do -
look at me, child, when i'm talking to you
practice some more, this game you declare
a couple more years and maybe you'll be there
did you get your style from watching 8 mile,
or downloading eyedea in the detroit finals?
either way, let me say that it impresses me not
to hear internet bragging about rhyming hot
lay it down on wax, throw down a beat
then maybe i'll toss the roses at your feet
if you never done produced, then you ain't done shit
no one considers battling in someone's basement
to be the real deal, no matter how you spin it
unless it's RC, that's me, the one you'll never forget

librasoul22 04-22-2003 07:56 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bro2B
If you honestly think that would win at a battle, you are sadly mistaken.

And a lot of your stuff is played/bitten - like the 404 line, I have heard that so many times. Keep droppin' that knowledge...

Okay, you keep saying that (familiar defensive technique btw, nice), but can you please cite what is bitten? I type each verse in response to the one before it. The 404 thing, I admit I have heard it before, but mine was in reference to GC crash last night. Come on man, if you are getting beat just say it, no need to call bite when you can't back it up.

The fact that you don't drop anything personalized says to me that it is not new material, so let's be real. I haven't called it yet because you haven't stepped it up, so there's no need.

I will still spit back though...

And I see you KSig...

librasoul22 04-22-2003 08:24 PM

Bro2b come in here as if he's rocking timbs and Sean Johns
Truth be told he's on the sideline in a dress with pom poms
Cheering the home team, oops, I meant spitting his verse
Male cheerleaders or female MC's, which is worse?
You're too repetitive, can I see my name in a rhyme?
I mean, I'm competitive can I get a theme for my next line?
If not its all good I'll just chatter bout nonsense
Better yet I'll just quote your last flow's contents
But oops! If I do that you might say my rhymes are so bitten
But I think in actuality you jealous of my spittin
Whether you green with envy or you green with youth
You might sit and absorb cause what you'll glean is truth

And KSIG RC, if GC had sound
My presence would part the circuits and open the ground
And the beats would be enough to make you fall down and give praise
Then the lyrics would rain down on GC like 40 days
As for staying how long on the web, ay yo I doubt
That I ever started a thread to up my post count
But no worries, tounge in cheek is a familiar concept

I AM STANDING HERE WONDERING HAS ANYONE CHALLENGED ME YET??

DeltaSigStan 04-22-2003 08:28 PM

Gotta step up and try to rap with all of you
Wanna get some props from the Greekchat keystyle crew
So I ask that since this is my very first time
Try to sympathize if you're laughing at this rhyme
I'm San Diego born and I'm San Diego raised
Living in a city where all the college kids are blazed
Member of Delta Sig the best frat at San Diego State
Gonna be on top again so all you haters sit back and wait
Now we're at the point where I'm supposed to talk mad trash
And I'mma try to be more dirty then Marv Albert at a beaver bash
So all the houses at State watch cause now I'm comin at you
Everyone's gonna read about all the shit that you all do
But don't worry everybody cause I will not name names
Cause this all just talk and I don't wanna start any GC games

There's a house out here full of tools and dorks
Delta Sig is fine silverware whereas these bitchs are all sporks
They say they're better than us cause they have more guys
But shit bitch, underneath all that you're full of lies
You see how we won all those awards this year and you did not?
like how we own a brand new mansion? You seen the limo we bought?
Sorry guys, stay in your shack and continue to talk mess
When we're the shit and you're still down there you'll surely hate less

A different house at state is full of preppy kids
Driving porches their dad's bought and sport abercrombie lids
Guys do you think that were you too good for greek week
That only 10 out of 100 guys would show up looking like cloned geeks?
Just because you think you can control repuations
Doesnt mean that you can control greek relations
Why? Cause those girls were too smart for your tricks?
Cause they saw that all you're good for is the coke and the dick?
Please, just because you're big across the USA
Doesn't mean in the grek circle you have complete and total say

Oh! There's this other frat here that spikes girls drinks
So she can pass out and do.....well, what do you think?
I never see you fools on campus so how can you be "all big"?
Ive hope you have the same fate here as those "other sigs"

One final frat that I have to mention
They think because they had a good rush they're in another dimension
Guys, we know that you're all huge now and you wanna talk
How your parties got girls and ours are filled with cock
But remember 418 and our stripper poles?
OUR PARTY BITCH WAS FILLED WITH MUCH MORE HOLE!
By the way, good job at the talent show
But you didnt even place at greek week and we won third...DOH!

And to one of those guys in that house who thinks he's all thug
I'm still the orkin man bitch and you're still a ladybug
You think you can flow and your rhymes are sick?
Theyre not bitch, youre representing a frat full of hicks!
You stand alone cause you're who you are
But trust me dog, that aint gonna get you far
You say you're a superstar an that your songs will be hits?
You worked for days on your stuff but I just threw together this shit
So please, J, you need to go back and practice a while
Take that weak fade of yours, go home, and watch some 8 Mile.

AlphaGamDiva 04-22-2003 09:08 PM

i wanna play!!!
 
oooooooh...deltasigstan comin in with a vengence!
b2b's rhyme's make me wonder "what is this"
as always, libra-----has got the most flow
KSigRC....well whadoyaknow?
i ain't tryin to come up in here with some mad rhyme
honestly it hurts my head and takes too much time
so don't start on me with my 3rd grade skills
it's up to bro2b to make this place ill
and with that said, libra so did rock ya
after your sick rhymes, she comes in like the docta!

Quote:

Originally posted by librasoul22
I AM STANDING HERE WONDERING HAS ANYONE CHALLENGED ME YET??
"not i" said the lil squirrel.......:p and bro2b, just a lil fun.....please don't blow me up.....stay focused on tryin to beat libra! ;)
again, all very impressive!!!

Bro2B 04-22-2003 11:22 PM

I'm not getting that personal because I don't know you. Have you ever battled someone on the yard? In a parking lot? It's cool you can do it written - I'm trying to give you props for that. IF you want examples of what's bitten, check out Canibus at the online hip-hop lyric archive - ohlla.com. Some of it just seems awfully familiar. My friends and I have an informal battle league and the biggest rules that we use are no biting, which I think we all know means using someone else's lines, even if you flip the script a lil bit it's still someone else's idea and they probably spit it better. It's not being defensive, it's just being a hip hop head and listening to all kinds of MCs, whether it's mainstream like 50 is now, or Busdriver, or whoever.

That being said if you want personals, I'll be like you and do a board search so I learn something about you. Writing a personal about me cheering is cool, especially when I'm a graduate and haven't been doing it for a year, and I was on a full scholarship to do something I enjoyed and got to hang out with some cool people doing it. That's the main personal you came with - being a male cheerleader. That's no less admirable than being a femcee. I'll drop something in a little bit, that isn't pre-written (nothing has been pre-written but it's hard to come off the domepiece when it's on the internet and you don't actually know them).

Bro2B 04-22-2003 11:23 PM

I forgot the other big rule - no feeding, i.e. I don't feed off your verse and come back with something off of that and try to flip a better line off of it. There's usually a bar limit too - 10-20 (i.e. 20-40 lines).

Peace.

librasoul22 04-22-2003 11:44 PM

Nah to be honest with you, I am not as good in person as I am writing. Written is of course, way easier. I am familiar with Canibus, yes, but my lyrics are my own. Don't accuse me of biting unless you can name something specific.

I have been battling since I was in middle school. Where I come from it is more like the dozens. I can get real lyrical if you want, but to me a battle gotta burn.

Nothing personal against you at all (like you said, I don't know you), that's just how I do.

As far as "feeding" and what not, there is not an official rule book, lol. When I "feed" it is to personalize my rhymes, not to be lazy. I could be generic and just flow, but where's the battle in that?

Also, as far as bar limits, around here it ain't that serious. Lighten up, lol.

librasoul22 04-23-2003 12:50 AM

Ok...

Since peeps are catching some hurt pride
I tie one hand behind my back and escape from the outside
Did that confuse you?
I draw you a map and still lose you
I got more notebooks than any archeologist can peruse through
Librasoul biting a rhyme? Nah boy, I never steal
I gotta bite your rhyme though to make sure that ish is real
Understand?
On the surface it looks like you might be fading
If I bite all the way through what is underneath waiting?
Bitterness
And really who on GC can blame you?
Another MC wanna step up? Come on you'll get shamed too
It's painful
And honestly I don't know what hurts worse
That you accused me of biting, or how you'll never be Wordsworth
(The MC).

Bro2B 04-23-2003 01:35 AM

Multi's I promised
 
Just an experiment in multi's I promised earlier that I wrote out over the past day.

Words visual, quasars and television pixels, 3 dimensional , speed critical , ebonic rhythm ritual , battle scar tissue , procreation competitional , bible truth contradictional , meaning of life not written, but seen within, fate's mastery , hearts exceeding capacity , emotional catastrophe, hate flows like adrenaline in blood rapidly , newly born prophecy , fulfilled impossibly , whose philosophy , makes more sense astonishingly , questions answered interrogatively , basic beliefs darkened positively , heaven and hell exchange geography , in the balance is where we all must be , lives bartered in monopoly , scrutinizing monotony , euthanasia legalized , elderly genocide , assisted suicide , punishment verified , death penalty penalized , ironic shocking , life ending , circle repeating , infinity , just a walk away , nothing is finished , God's forgiveness , spirits enter with quickness , clouds seated to limit , sons being paid a visit , tourists not burned , frostbitten , what's the difference , well I guess it depends on what you believe in... heed the following battle call, tattered shorts of a verse burst, hell all of yall remain enthralled with one mic to unite them all.

DeltaSigStan 04-23-2003 02:52 AM

Remember that guy from 8 Mile named Lotto?
The one Em said he'd get his momma's digits for a dolla tommorow?
You know how Em said that one could understand a word he spoke?
Well, Im telling you now and this is no joke:
There's a guy just like him on GC where you don't understand a thing he types,
I'm talking about Tom Earp! So all of you are bout to hear my gripes
How can you defend a guy who types like he's 13?
He types some of the most incoherent shit I've ever seen
How do his posts, as you say, "make you think?"
If grammar was a crime this guy would be in the clink!
Just because you're old doesn't mean you can't make any sense
I know people decades older whose words can hold you in suspense
That's an insult to those seniors who are smarter than a lot of you
People who still do a lot of the things the youngens do
So please Tommy Boy, don't even try to explain that shit
Cause I for one don't believe your justification, not one single bit
And don't you all come at me for all the shit that I have given Tom
Cause I've talked to a whole lot of you and you said the same shit about that pawn

DeltaSigStan 04-24-2003 06:06 PM

*BUMP*

KSig RC 04-24-2003 08:01 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by librasoul22
And honestly I don't know what hurts worse
That you accused me of biting, or how you'll never be Wordsworth

In the end, these cheesy lines just make me sigh,
you aren't exactly writing "Expostulation and Reply"
and i feel for ya, girl, 'cause you really try
but there just ain't much behind all these rhymes
so "The Tables Turned" on this battle game
but for keying up lame, you can't be blamed
not everyone here is "The Idiot Boy,"
and that's "The Last of the Flock" on this Wordsworth ploy -
or didn't you understand that crack?
I know that's not what you meant, but i wound it back
'cause what's an MC without some history?
rhyming didn't begin with Talib Kweli
So go ahead and focus on Bro2B
I'll keep dropping shit to make your hands numb,
'cause I have rhyme talent like Dionysus has Dumb
y'all play Dick and Jane like the start of "The Bluest Eye"
while my styles evolving like Jeff Goldblum in "The Fly"
Don't know why you say you wanna play these rhetorical games,
Head's so big it floats over the Macy's parade
But next time you decide to step to me,
read a few lines written over Tinturn Abbey
and if you wanna keep on with this indefinitely,
I'll keep bringing metaphor and similie

done (not bad for a kid with strep)

librasoul22 04-24-2003 08:25 PM

Dang, this thread died...
 
DeltaSigStan tryin to prevent this thread from going under
So I'll step in wonderful, and leave ya azzes full of wonder
Some powerful force of nature must have seriously interfered
Because Bro2b and KSig RC have mysteriously disappeared
But it's all good, it's love, and yo I hold no grudge
try to separate me and my title but yo i won't budge
I guess Bro thought that little "rhyme" was something clever
All librasoul sees is the biggest run-on sentence ever
And here's the punctuation, in fact its an exclamation
You tried to reach the point but you forgot your destination


And DeltaSigStan, this is just by the way
I saw that little rhyme about T Earp the other day
While I don't always appreciate his errors and dinner plans
I see insulting him makes you feel like a bigger man
Keep rhyming about your org and your parties and your house
And keep on getting drunk so you can torture another mouse
Obviously you like to pick on things that don't pick back
Well you picked the wrong thread when you came up in chit chat
Next time you rhyme, why dont you come at librasoul
Then *BUMP* it to the top so I can beat u like you stole
And forget T Earp, cause I'm about to drop dime
I'd rather have bad grammar than your gay azz rhymes

librasoul22 04-24-2003 08:44 PM

posting at the same time...
 
Quote:

Originally posted by KSig RC
In the end, these cheesy lines just make me sigh,
you aren't exactly writing "Expostulation and Reply"
and i feel for ya, girl, 'cause you really try
but there just ain't much behind all these rhymes
so "The Tables Turned" on this battle game
but for keying up lame, you can't be blamed
not everyone here is "The Idiot Boy,"
and that's "The Last of the Flock" on this Wordsworth ploy -
or didn't you understand that crack?
I know that's not what you meant, but i wound it back
'cause what's an MC without some history?
rhyming didn't begin with Talib Kweli
So go ahead and focus on Bro2B
I'll keep dropping shit to make your hands numb,
'cause I have rhyme talent like Dionysus has Dumb
y'all play Dick and Jane like the start of "The Bluest Eye"
while my styles evolving like Jeff Goldblum in "The Fly"
Don't know why you say you wanna play these rhetorical games,
Head's so big it floats over the Macy's parade
But next time you decide to step to me,
read a few lines written over Tinturn Abbey
and if you wanna keep on with this indefinitely,
I'll keep bringing metaphor and similie

done (not bad for a kid with strep)

Although that Words line was for Bro, I see it stung you too
The elders drop knowledge while the young boo-hoo
I agree rhyming didnt begin with Talib or Mos Def
It began when I emerged and took my first breath
And I spoke into the mic attached to my umbilical cord
And verbally slaughtered you before I left the maternity ward
Metaphor? Simile? Do you even know the definition?
You? Challenge me? Did you think you were competion?

Not really.

Optimist Prime 04-24-2003 09:05 PM

Straight outta radoford, a crazy motha f*cka flounder
get that bitch to bend over, and i'ma pound her
just like she needs it, funk flounder bleeds it
like a secret agenet, gets mission, completes it
if the bitch gets pregnant, i tell her a-bor-it
i bet all these right wing sluts will abhor it
i'll say it again so ya'll can't ingnore it
i ain't got no time for no kids no kids
Mamma talkin' bout what the dada dids
ain't making no sense, like the dadaists
ain't suicidal, ain't slittin' no writsts, no writsts

quit swithing that beat up

DeltaSigStan 04-24-2003 09:17 PM

While I do appreciate you tryin to come at me
and trust me, I do believe in rap gender equality
I'm sorry girl but you're just not the one
Cause after reading your shit, I think I'm gonna have some fun
Tryin to come at me for going after Tom
defending that geezer just like he's your mom
Trust me girl, he can surely fend for himself
I'm sure that his brain is in pretty good health
Sayin that I pick on things that are smaller,
That I'd rather pick on a midget than someone who's taller?
Give me a break girl it's not like Tom's a child
So that was a weak attempt to get me all riled
I see that you have several battles you started
Tryin to rap with the big boys is like you going to a club and geting carded
They'll leave your ass at the door no matter how fine you are
You're "skills", according to many, are just incredibly subpar
And about that shit about that little mouse
I'm sure you wouldn't want that thing runnin around your house
So I tortured it a little, and for it I might just go to hell
BFD people! I knew that already so oh well!
Sure my bros and I like to drink and smoke
You can come by one day and I'll give you a fat ass toke
But at SDSU we're not the only one
It's just that the rep we're givin is just us always havin fun
I mean, maybe we'd participate a little more
But when we want to, we just ask "what for?"
All the big houses like to talk shit on the small frats
Like a cloned, rich boy pitt bull picking on innocent little cats
And why bother caring when all the sorors hate?
With them, its all coke and numbers that decide a frat's fate
And think of it this way, say we were to get big?
Holy shit! 120 members are in Delta Sig!
Of course then the sorors would wanna hang out
How superficial is that? That's so shallow, without a doubt
So we're gonna continue partyin like we always do
So the random girls and homeboys can party with our crew
And if anyone calls us on it, they can think about the way
That the greeks talk shit about us almost every day
Don't get me wrong, we're not the only ones
With sorors, 30 or less guys always equals no fun
But once again I shall elude to the fact
That the plebian chatter about us will not get us to react
Oh, and by the way, this thread was on page four
So I bumped it up again for all to adore
If I hadnt done that, it would get lost in the bunch
At page 2 I realized this so I bumped it on a hunch
So please thank me for giving you the chance
To step up to the big boys and try to dance
But, battling three at once, for you will result in a loss
Cause Bro2B, Ksigrc and me are the windows to your DOS

Optimist Prime 04-24-2003 09:17 PM

thank you, Spainard
My goodnes, Maynard
does anyone named Benard call himself Bay-nerd
gotta go do time in a prison type chainyard
like foot ball playa, trying to gain a tain yard ,
cuz that's a first down, leads to touch down
like a healed up cripple i'm putting my crutch down

DigitalAngel126 04-24-2003 09:32 PM

Oh sh*t, here it comes....



Bustin' out this mutha like 'DAMN'
Like where'd this b*tch come from, man?

Y'all need an education
When it comes to copulation -
Lyrical intercourse
Isn't happenin
All this bad rappin'
Got me scrappin
Findin' a cure
For this disease - - Wannabe MC's
Can't take it anymore

Bro2B talk about infectious disease
Where'd that come from? Please!!
Wanna step like that, come to me
Get continuous flows like a nosebleed...



Yup, that's all I got...And only b/c librasoul talked me into it... so please please PLEASE don't flame me, I already kno how much I suck!!!!!!!! :p

KSig RC 04-24-2003 10:06 PM

Re: posting at the same time...
 
Quote:

Originally posted by librasoul22
Metaphor? Simile? Do you even know the definition?
You? Challenge me? Did you think you were competion?

Not really.

The typographic errors suit you to a T,
showing the incomplete nature of your mic personality,
"Challenge me?" Blasphemy - and she asks for definition
kid, in the renaissance you wouldn't even be my patron
i'm over your head like archangel gabriel
turning greekchat into your lyrical hell
talking real big from the glow of her dell,
she says i don't know my shit when she can't even spell
yes i see the irony behind that line, trust me
but i get a little on it when i start to get free
i haven't seen nothing impressive in a day or three
hey, hasn't that been your reign, coincidently?
either way, let me say that i've started to pray
for you to provide some competition someday
I'm a bandit on the mic, stealing hearts and minds
and that's your metaphor, easily defined
simile won't be had so simply from me,
harder to grasp just like that brass ring
and before this starts to border on poetry at last,
i'll give you one last concept to grasp:
Make sure you keep your mind here on the task,
'cause I eat MCs like air, a lyric sylvia plath
and i'll come back around later tonight,
anxiously awaiting another 6-line reply

librasoul22 04-24-2003 10:35 PM

Um...

DeltaSigStan, young man,
I will be blunt, You Have Issues.
When you spit you might as well wipe your tongue with toilet tissue
It's sh*t
I've said it before, and I repeat it
If I were you, i would go back to that sh*t and just delete it
Matter fact after that last line I just completed
I decided you owe me back the two seconds it took to read it

Who ARE you?

librasoul22 04-24-2003 10:42 PM

Re: Re: posting at the same time...
 
Quote:

Originally posted by KSig RC

"Challenge me?" Blasphemy - and she asks for definition
kid, in the renaissance you wouldn't even be my patron


I know this will come across as being quite rude
But I have heard better rhymes in dyslexic haikus
Now, you mentioned 6 lines but really, why give more?
To be honest at this point you're only worth about four.

KSig RC 04-24-2003 10:46 PM

Re: Re: Re: posting at the same time...
 
Quote:

Originally posted by librasoul22
I know this will come across as being quite rude
But I have heard better rhymes in dyslexic haikus
Now, you mentioned 6 lines but really, why give more?
To be honest at this point you're only worth about four.

She's never heard of slant rhyme, obviously -
throwing syllables around carelessly
and the four was good, but I did it in three

DeltaSigStan 04-24-2003 11:17 PM

Yeah, um, ok now whatever,
You fucked up that chance with me to be clever
You sound like you've been under the weather
Cause from what I just read you haven't gotten any better
I like how the one with issues is me
When you're always up in shit, calling all this controversey
The two seconds I owe you have already been paid
You owe me that time for reading all your shitty posts that you have made
But don't worry girl, I know you have some problems
And I think I can help try to solve them
It's all miopic for you, you still can't see clearly
My, Bro2B's and KSRC's posts have crushed you dearly
So stop trying to run with us, cause you'll come up last
Cause you're slower as the fat chick Eminem said sat down too fast.

librasoul22 04-25-2003 01:56 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by DeltaSigStan
Yeah, um, ok now whatever,
You fucked up that chance with me to be clever
You sound like you've been under the weather
Cause from what I just read you haven't gotten any better
I like how the one with issues is me
When you're always up in shit, calling all this controversey
The two seconds I owe you have already been paid
You owe me that time for reading all your shitty posts that you have made
But don't worry girl, I know you have some problems
And I think I can help try to solve them
It's all miopic for you, you still can't see clearly
My, Bro2B's and KSRC's posts have crushed you dearly
So stop trying to run with us, cause you'll come up last
Cause you're slower as the fat chick Eminem said sat down too fast.

Wow, DeltaSigSTAN aren't you living up to your name
If you spent any more time on Em's d*ck, he woulda came
Maybe then you would jump off and try to be unique
Nah, you'd prolly just write about his penis in your cheek
Put down the album liner and for once be creative
You're in my territory, and u f*ckin with the native
Don't flatter yourself, you aint in Bro or KSig's league,
You would never survive librasoul's lyrical Blitzkreig
You might as well take an L, cause boy u just suck
Libra come through and leave ya azz awestruck.

KSig I was gonna do it in 2, but guess what?
You got DeltaSigStan hanging off your left nut
So now I'm battling three, cubed like rubix squares
But they busy tangled up in each other's pubic hairs

And KSig, it's cute how you tried to call me out on slant rhymes
But dude I think we all know it's that you just CAN'T rhyme

DeltaSigStan 04-25-2003 02:59 AM

Heh, talking bout how I rip from Eminem,
LIke it's a complete total act to condemn
Is it my fault that in this game you suck?
And your weak attempts at me left you shit outta luck?
Don't even go there with being on anyone's jock
Cause you're the supreme queen of slobbin random cock
Look, I know an education you need
But damn girl that's a horrible way to go at it indeed
I can tell cause there's no way you made up those rhymes
It was your pimp Bro2B who taught you! you know, stealin that shit is a crime
Of course maybe it was your sugadaddy KSigRC
Made you into the best hoe that you could possibly be
Or maybe it was just me, sorry girl you don't have to work for me
The rest of your female family made me some money naturally
Wipe your chin girl cause I think it's time for another trick
For you to pull, so don't think your rhymes are so sick
And Libra, even if you do this, at least raise your rates
Youre still barely makin enough to put even buy paper plates
So how are you gonna eat the ramen you had to steal
Nothing to place them on, so I guess you miss another meal
I remember this one episode of the great talk show Jerry
About this 60 yr old trick who was all crusted and hairy
Man, even this old hag looked better than you
With all this bad shit going for you I dunno What The Fuck youre gonna do.
So please girl, just go on and give it a rest
I'm your profesor, you're the homely student who just failed this test

KSig RC 04-25-2003 03:49 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by librasoul22
And KSig, it's cute how you tried to call me out on slant rhymes
But dude I think we all know it's that you just CAN'T rhyme

It's cool you took pains to frame this around my middle name,
But just the same, it's just a game, only one can remain
And I see you're down, wearin a frown, after losing renown -
must be tough to hear my boy stan take you to town
and to add more frustration for your rhyme libation,
I present a quick librasoul impersonation:

"I'm going to write out a very long sentence cutting on you, my friend -
and the only things that have to rhyme are the very words at the end,
and while i reach into the bag for some words i don't think that you know,
i'm going to completely ignore the very important and weighty, yet under-utilized, concept of flow"

but i'm admired with pride, what ya gonna do -
number retired nationwide like the blue 42
or is that another line you didn't understand,
rollin from my tongue like it's straight off-hand
and for my last trick, well it's gonna be grand:
your shit's like uf_pike: it's made to be banned

librasoul22 04-25-2003 02:25 PM

Heh, talking bout how I rip from Eminem,
LIke it's a complete total act to condemn


So stop trying to run with us, cause you'll come up last
Cause you're slower as the fat chick Eminem said sat down too fast.


Stan listen,
Pleas take a quick break from riding testicles,
The only place your sh*t belongs is the nearest trash recepticle
It's garbage, can u even muster sentence structure?
Or has my verbal enslaught attacked your brain and left you flustered?
Probably the latter
My rhymes can invade your brain matter
Time elapses, your synapses stop firing cause i shatter
The neurons
making your grammar go bananas
i paint your lyrical destruction on a messageboard canvas

KSig RC,
I like that little impersonation
So let me come thru with a KSig interpretation

"librasoul, librasoul, your sh*t is just too raw
I mean sometimes my rhymes don't really rhyme at all
And I guess I don't really take the time to pay attention
I should be glad I've been blessed with your divine intervention
Sorry, I have another problem on my hands
I can't seem to rid myself of deltasigstan
I think he is sending me love notes on the subliminal
And I have this nagging gravitational pull down in my genitals"

DeltaSigStan 04-25-2003 05:35 PM

Your rhymes couldn't impress a girl in fourth grade
It's almost the first of the month, go get your welfare check so you can get paid
Stop trying to come at me like anything you say matters
You're The Most ignored, insignificant greekchatter
Is it that time of the month again? Is PMS driving you?
Bitching while on your rag doesnt make you grown up enough to be in this crew
I'm sorry that your daddy dropped you when you were a kid
And Im sorry that he touched you there, I'm sorry for all the things he did
But just because you're childhood really blew
Doesn't mean you can come at us, cause that's not the thing to do
Just sit back, learn from us, and one day you might get
Half the skill we have, though you'll still be our pet
I guess your owner forgot to feed you today
Or maybe your leash is too tight and you're lost in the fray
Don't worry, someone will come by with some Kibbles and bits
But they might die from laughing at your really small tits
So in closing, I'm telling you to stop cause you're a bore
You just keep regurgitating the same shit you said before.

Italic lyric changed because librasoul called me on something musicians have done for a while now.

librasoul22 04-25-2003 10:18 PM

"Cause at this rate I doubt you could get any badder"

You know what? I refuse to even entertain you anymore due to this. If you can search deep down and find some semblence of skill I will get back to you. Til then, KSig or Bro2b, looking for y'all...

DeltaSigStan 04-25-2003 10:19 PM

Whatever you say....

DigitalAngel126 04-26-2003 12:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by librasoul22
"Cause at this rate I doubt you could get any badder"

You know what? I refuse to even entertain you anymore due to this. If you can search deep down and find some semblence of skill I will get back to you. Til then, KSig or Bro2b, looking for y'all...


BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! :D I swear as I was reading the Badder line, I was thinkin "Girl don't even mess with him....the dude says badder!!!" LOL Guess you read my mind :p

DeltaSigStan 04-26-2003 01:17 PM

Ugh, as if musicians have never made up words before.

Wow, one word in an entire paragraph, never mind me calling you a dog, or saying how daddy dropped you, or how you need to wipe your chin because you suck dick to pay your way through school. I'll just change the word.


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