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I like attempt #2! Is there any way to make the flowers in the lettering a lighter color so "FIJI Islander" stands out a little more, though?
The lei hanging off the bottom is cute, too. I liked that in the last version and I like it in this one. :) |
Why do I always think of Red Dwarf whenever I check this thread???
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I really like this font! It's much more tropical and consistent with the theme.
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Typically, if you are mixing colors darker colors are "background" colors and lighter colors are in "forward" colors for emphasis. Also, you are losing color in the lei. Can you put some brighter colors in it or make the outline heavier?
(sorry, I work with marketing people everyday, and they argue about "just the right color of grey") |
I like both designs, but I agree that the first was hard to read "Fiji". I think the first design, with a font change, would be great for brothers' shirts, but I think the second design would be better for sorority shirts. I absolutely love the second design, hence why I think it would be best for sorority shirts.
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Could the letters that make up the words "FIJI Islander" be a cobalt or dark bright blue while the leaves behind the letters be a kelly green? Then the wording will be more prominent.
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What I'm working on now is making the flowers alternate between pink and green, its coming along really well but its taking a good deal of time.
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Just a suggestion, but I'd definitely use a different font than the Comic Sans you used for the date of the event. It looks too 3rd-grade teacher-ish. (Personally, I can't STAND Comic Sans because it's so overused.)
I really like the other font, though! |
much, much more readable . agree that the lei is a little lost right now and brighter colors and more deliniated outline of the lei might help it "pop".
maybe a little grass shack at the edge of the water with a surfboard leaning against a wall and a woody parked nearby. palm trees too. and since we all helped out, can we come? |
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The 2nd one is so much better You could make the date font more fun too though |
Attempt #3, I really like this one and I think that all the girls will too.
http://aycu38.webshots.com/image/422...6451073_rs.jpg |
I think it's perfect. Nice Job.
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