I accidentally hit "page down" and saw that the story was over lol.
well I'm glad you like being a DG!

ETA: just read the first page. no comments. that is all.

Ferocious Beast??? I couldn't remember what that was from... I think I am right...

I like how she "voted" on who to go back to....If you are going to make up a story, at least use the right vocabulary, and don't say thats what your school calls it - because thats just not plausible.

I'm so ashamed.......:(
"Splash," "I<3" or whoever you are...learn how to spell and punctuate correctly. It doesn't matter if this is an internet forum...YES people care about that sort of thing. Your writing is hard to read and makes you look stupid. Work on that...then come back and we'll work on attitude.:rolleyes:

It's sad to know that even 2 years later, your maturity level is still at 0.

Be embarrassed? Keep it to yourself?

This may well be the best "recruitment story" ever. It is like watching a train wreck in slow motion. You are both horrified and fascinated at the same time and while it is occurring you are just praying it is not real.

Hey guys, sorry I wrote I guess immature. All caps and punctuation from now on!

I don't think that capitalizing letters and using the correct punctuation are your only problems...

Calling the Grammar Nazi!

Stop... just stop. You are embarrassing yourself and your organization. That is if you are even legitimate (which I highly doubt). You sound like a shallow, 13 yr. old airhead who failed middle school English. If you are in a 2007 pledge class, you are almost/are 20 years old and a junior in college. Act like it and write like it.

Oh please, please, please let this be a fake story!

And please learn how to write.

As a writer, I agree!

Wow, did Courtney Stodden start this thread???